Resolved Question: RHH: Liquid Swords .?

first time i wrote it

My spit gives you more chills then you get onna cold day/
I spray more spit than you do with an AK/
I ain’t on that gangsta sh*t…but ima lyrical rampage/
I swings things like GZA did on some CDs/
continue to slice tracks as long as im breathing/
really?, now don’t step to me with some of that b*tch sh*t/
you can’t burn me sucka, i was born liquid/
but my bars are hot enough to melt cement that’s thickened/
when the mics equipped, there is no restrictions/
my sh*t fucks with the head like cocaine addictions/
you wanna stop now?, you got plenty decisions/
my punchlines hit harder than freeway collisions/
I got metaphoric bars for as long as I’m livin’/
my lyrics are more on point than a liquid sword that is swingin’/
they’re RZA sharper than the edges that were made for the bleedin’/
you’ll get burned more than eyes that are seasoned/

2nd time

My spit has the lyrical ability to withhold/
n give you more chills than you get in the cold/
I got bars like the arms onna centipede/
im not the rapper that kills, im your lyrical remedy/
i chop beats like GZA did on some CD’s/
continue to slice tracks as long as im breathing/
put the pieces together quikly and try to fix it/
but don’t try ta step with some of that b*tch sh*t/
you can’t burn me sucka i was born liquid/
but can spit sh*t that melts cement that’s thickened/
when controllin’ the mic there isn’t restrictions/
my shit fucks wit the head like cocaine addictions/
your a patrollin’ cop car lookin for the precision/
punchlines like mine that hit hard like freeway collisions/
metaphoric bars for ya as long as im livin’/
ya feelin guilty after this like a jury decision/

wich way is better? and rate it 1-10
(over Liquid Swords beat)
12th line: it’s

“my sh*t f*cks with the head like cocaine addictions”
@Toney: its not off beat, you must have no flow, it flowed perfect to me. a good artist can flow anything

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